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PostPosted: Fri Dec 12, 2008 12:44 am    Post subject: Truckers 08 christmas compo entry Reply with quote

This is still a wip, but is close enough to being done, I thought I'd show it.



I'm still trying to figure out why the trees look lit. Confused
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PostPosted: Fri Dec 12, 2008 1:17 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

wow pretty nice, my only critique is your fence is really really thick Very Happy maybe making it a lil thinner
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PostPosted: Fri Dec 12, 2008 3:43 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Check the material settings on the trees, you might have turned off lighting on them like you did on the green lights.

I like it a lot. But you need to work on overall scene scale, and proportions.
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PostPosted: Fri Dec 12, 2008 4:10 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

MeinenM wrote:
wow pretty nice, my only critique is your fence is really really thick Very Happy maybe making it a lil thinner


Fixed. I knew about this one, but hadn't fixed it.

Daaark wrote:
Check the material settings on the trees, you might have turned off lighting on them like


Thanks. I'll have to relight to fix it, but that's ok. I need to add the stars to the top as well.

Daaark wrote:
you need to work on overall scene scale, and proportions.

Yup. Still have a few things.

Thanks for the critiques. I may have a 3 day weekend to work on it. Confused
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PostPosted: Fri Dec 12, 2008 9:28 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Looking very good, Trucker! You improved a lot Very Happy
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PostPosted: Fri Dec 12, 2008 2:50 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

try to make those candy sticks point towards the middle they all go to the right
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PostPosted: Fri Dec 12, 2008 11:39 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

[K]hajit wrote:
try to make those candy sticks point towards the middle they all go to the right


haha, thanks. I hadn't noticed that. Smile
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PostPosted: Sat Dec 13, 2008 3:13 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Ok, fixed the fence, house, deleted the 26 clones of 1 fence board, Confused deleted the 2 sets of 26 extra clones of lights, added the carpet and tree toppers.



I added a tree inside, but you can't see it. Can't think of anything else to add.
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PostPosted: Sat Dec 13, 2008 9:49 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

nice =D
you made the house larger and the trees look more 3D now
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PostPosted: Sat Dec 13, 2008 11:37 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

That's pretty, I like it Smile
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PostPosted: Sat Dec 13, 2008 12:07 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

lol you sneaky boy Very Happy ..
trying to impress jeroen and paul jan with a gift there xD
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PostPosted: Sat Dec 13, 2008 4:06 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Done.

Changed the tree toppers. (I didn't like the bulky things I put there)
Moved the inside tree so people could see it. Added presents under it.
Added bows to the outside presents.

Edit: Oops
Added snow to the trees.


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PostPosted: Sat Dec 13, 2008 4:34 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

What's up with the windows? They are tiny and at knee height.

No sense of scale at all.

But I like the scene otherwise. Very nice.
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PostPosted: Sat Dec 13, 2008 4:41 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

LOL... dark is jelous he wants a present to xD
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PostPosted: Sat Dec 13, 2008 4:48 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

[K]hajit wrote:
LOL... dark is jelous he wants a present to xD
No jealously here. I want to see trucker improve.
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